tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6298464760973671001.post6772106691802147231..comments2023-05-18T04:47:34.331-07:00Comments on Remembering Places: Remembering A PlaceRemembering Placeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02172405018512011993noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6298464760973671001.post-39087771730806017302008-10-24T03:00:00.000-07:002008-10-24T03:00:00.000-07:00Dear Andy,Thanks for posting this. My favourite li...Dear Andy,<BR/><BR/>Thanks for posting this. My favourite line here is: "This rectangle of rest: pillows, quilts and sheets" - an original way of describing a bed. I'm not convinced by some of the rhymes - perhaps you could experiment by getting rid of the rhyme and seeing what happens to the poem's form?<BR/><BR/>Thanks, JonathanJonathan Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13808404405558963319noreply@blogger.com